starmark: (CALM ☆ we're doing flips and shit)
Jotaro Kujo ([personal profile] starmark) wrote in [personal profile] manuscripture 2016-10-25 03:00 pm (UTC)

[It does, eventually; the other thing that's slightly off about the tune is the pacing, as though he doesn't quite have the natural gift of knowing how to bring it to a smooth and neat end and so he draws it out just a little bit too long. He used to do that, didn't he, when he was first learning to play and all he could manage were a handful of chords, and yet his dad would make them sound like the backbone of a duet just from his own expertise — he'd always come close to playing one measure too many, wouldn't feel the conclusion the way his father ever did.

Eventually he finds his way to it, though, and when he does he sets the guitar aside fully, lounging back onto his side and facing Rohan to watch him while he seems to drowse.]


Your tail makes a good metronome.

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